Wednesday, September 22, 2004

5:13 pm eyes...

eyes meet...across a peak commuter train

eyes connect...a rarity in Vancouver

eyes smile...followed by the mouth

eyes glance away...it's forbidden here

eyes move back to peek...that didn't just happen

eyes meet again...he's peeking back

eyes get closer...the train is crowding

eyes lock...smiles rise again

eyes close seductively...eye want you

eyes reveal hearts...eye love you

eyes open wider...his hand brushed mine

eyes smile again...hands brush again

eyes look pained...can't break the silence

eyes smile longingly...this is my stop

eyes say "don't go!"...eye step off the train

eyes say "bye"...eye look back as the doors close

eyes watch as the train departs...two folorn faces

eye miss you...are you still thinking of me too?